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| | A Kanto Story, Chapter 23 | |
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silversalamence10
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| Subject: A Kanto Story, Chapter 23 Fri Dec 23, 2011 8:01 am | |
| Chapter 23: The Bike Race
- Who's that Pokemon from last time: Diglett
- Last time Silver won the Thunder Badge from Lt. Surge
(RBY Bike Music Plays)
Author: with my new trip wire and Octillery system that Voice-Over wont.......
--Voice-Over: maybe you should keep an eye on your back doors
Author: damn you, enyjoy
- 2 days later
Silver: well now that we all have Thunder Badges, now what?
Jordan: what was that you were talking about 2 days ago Samson?
Samson: well i overheard a conversation of there being a bike race in a few days time
Silver: but we don't have bikes, how can we....
- just then the head of the Pokemon Fan Club in Vermillion came into the pokemon center
Fan Club Pres: hohoho did i hear someone not having bkies for tomorrow's race?
Jordan: no, you must be hearing things
Fan Club Pres: hohoho, my ears don't lie kids, here i have 3 Bike Vouchers
Silver: really: you're just gonna give them to us?
Samson: is it christmas already?
Fan Club Pres: no no, i don't need them, and you did save the S.S. Anne, my fvourite cruise ship in Kanto
Silver: oh, well i guess we better get to a bike shop then
Jordan: but isn't the nearest bike shop in Cerulean?
- a couple of hours later...
Silver: wow! look at this place
Hero: impressive, isn't it? we put alot of work into this
Jordan: where's the Bike Shop?
Hero: (points) why, over there
S, Sa and J: thanks
Bike Shop man: ah, customers what can i do for you
- Silver, Jordan and Samson flash their Vouchers
Bike Shop man: in exchange for 3 bikes? certainly
- The Bike Shop man gives them the 3 bikes and they bike back to vermillion as they arrive the organizer of the Route 11 Bike Race approaches them
ANON: you look like you want to enter our annual Bike Race tomorrow?
Silver: yea
ANON: great! just put your names on the sign-up sheet
- Silver, Jordan and Samson sign-up for the race and park their Bikes at the pokemon center and sleep there overnight - The Next day......
Silver: man i feel nervous
Jordan: come on Silver, it'll be fun
Silver: for a second there i though you were gonna......
Rick: you guys in the race too?
Jordan: Rick, i thought you were training?
Rick: i was, but this sounds like fun and i was planning on going through Route 11 anyway
Announcer: ladies and gentleman, welcome to the 3rd Annual Route 11 Bike Race, the rules are quite simple, you have to get to the finish line on Route 12 any way you like, just be weary of shortcuts too, now bikes to st starting line, 3, 2, 1, *gun shot* begin!
- and all the cyclists start the race, everyone trying to gain an edge on the others when...
ANON 2: hey, what's with the bridge?
ANON 3: Poliwhirl, Ice Beam!
- just like that, some cyclists took the slower bridge route, whilst the others including Silver and co. took the ice bridge
Silver: hey, thanks for that, you helped us out (speeds off)
ANON 3: darn it
Rick: move it or lose it! (speeds off too)
Jordan: hey! wait for meee! (also speeds off, and takes over Silver)
- Jordan and Rick made a comfortable lead over the others, then a few moments later...
Jordan: great just great, a shortcut, but do i....
Rick: eat my dust Jordan, i suggest you keep out of the forest if you don't have any bug spray or bug pokemon
Jordan: oh really? (enters forest)
Rick: Scyther cut a way through!
Jordan: thanks for the...(a kakuna appears randomly)...ahhh (hits a bush) agh damn it
Rick: (laughs) Jordan as much as i like you, you really should've taken my advice, see ya
Announcer: well would you look at that, Rick the bug catcher has caught a big lead by taking that shortcut, whilst Jordan looks as if he is down for the count
Samson: hmm... should i take the forest or not?
Silver: (passes Samson) it's a no brainer Samson
ANON 3: (passes Samson) yea, the forest is too dangerous
Samson: ok then, there's no way you're gonna win
Silver: hey wait a minute where's Jordan?
- meanwhile in the forest...
Jordan: thnks Ivysaur, man i hope my bike isn't totalled (checks) nope still ok, now i can get back into the race
Announcer: now it looks like a closely fought race for 2nd place as we have Silver, ANON 3, and Samson battling it out, and now we have Jordan back in the race, but can any of them catch up to Rick?
Samson: (looks over) there's Jordan, he just came out of that forest
Silver: ok so now it's a 4 horse race
Jordan: oh really? Rick far ahead of us
Silver: what?
Jordan: yea i took the same shortcut as him but i fell into a bush thanks to a kakuna
ANON 3: whilst you ladies are talking i'll take 2nd place, bye
Silver: oh no you don't
- meanwhile...
Rick: oh man, now what do i do? the finish is on the other side and there's a big boulder in the way
ANON 3: i can see someone in front
Silver: all i see is a big rock
Jordan: there's Rick!
Announcer: what a shocking turn of events, it looked as if Rick was gonna be the outright winner when a giant boulder has blocked the path to the finish line and now Silver, ANON 3, Samson and Jordan have caught up, the end of the race certainly will be interesting
Samson: oh great, it looks like noone is gonna win, and the other competitors are slowly coming in the distance
Rick: i'm not gonna lose because of some stupid boulder
ANON 3: Poliwhirl, Hydro Pump!
- Poliwhirl put alot of power into its attack but the boulder didn't budge
ANON 3: drat!
Silver: that won't work
ANON 3: and what are you gonna do brainiac?
Silver: this, Diglett get out there!
DIGLETT: diggg lettt (leave it to me!)
Silver: use Magnitude
- a pretty big earthquake is felt at magnitude 4, it was enough to desroy the rock
Silver: success, return Diglett!
Jordan: wait up!
ANON 3: oh no you don't
Samson: oh yea?
Rick: that victory is mine!
Announcer: this is it! Silver's Diglett managed to destroy the boulder and now it is a 5 horse race, let's see who will win!
S, A, Sa, J and R: aaaaaa!!!! aaaaaahhhhh!!
- the cyclists were going so fast that a huge dust cloud was createdand covered the finish line, just as they crossed it. A special x-ray camera is used to find out the winner
Announcer: this has got to be the closest Route 11 bike race i have ever seen, and the winner is.......Samson!! 2nd place going to Rick and 3rd going to Silver
Samson: man that was the closest race ever
Silver: i'll say
Announcer: ....and Samson receives his prize of $10,000, and now the other competitors are crossing the line, this has been the most exciting bike race ever, well done to all, andf that brings another bike race to a close
Jordan: now that's over we can get on with going through route 12
ANON 3: just one problem though..... (looks up)
Silver: oh my god, a huge boulder is blocking our path?!!
--------------------CHAPTER ENDS-------------------------
Who's that pokemon: the pokemon that caused Jordan to crash | |
| | | HawkPokemon™ Admin
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| Subject: Re: A Kanto Story, Chapter 23 Fri Dec 23, 2011 4:30 pm | |
| Amazing chapter I love it! I like the bike race idea it was awesome! You did a great job describing the race too. | |
| | | silversalamence10
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| Subject: Re: A Kanto Story, Chapter 23 Fri Dec 23, 2011 5:06 pm | |
| thanks, it wasn't easy doing that though | |
| | | HawkPokemon™ Admin
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| Subject: Re: A Kanto Story, Chapter 23 Fri Dec 23, 2011 6:21 pm | |
| Yeah it'd be hard for me to describe it too, but you did a great job. | |
| | | silversalamence10
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| Subject: Re: A Kanto Story, Chapter 23 Fri Dec 23, 2011 7:55 pm | |
| thanks, though i do have more comlicated storylines than this lined out for future chapters | |
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